Good advertisement but I need to hear it for 3 times to understand what you guys are talking about. However, I like it because it has good sound effect and it make the advertisement mermory... Also, some of the part were not fluency.
I like the advertisement is good but I have to hear your advert 4 times to know what you guys talking about. Anyway, I like your advert because you guys put good sound effect and it make your advert become very special. Your enunciation is good and your grammar...Finally, you guys have a good information and good voice but is not very fluency.
Great job guy, but at beginning your sound must little bit louder. I know what you try to say, you try to say we must learn little bit about martial art. Your PSA very creative, and it true. you guy very focus on topic. You don't have any incorrect grammar. You guy smooth the sound very good. You should improve the sound because sometime it to loud some time it to little. You guy do very great job!
The first thing I noticed is it has too much violent sounds. This is a PSA (I think), so maybe those sounds are not really suitable. Martial art is not the only way to protect you. The volume was not really good throughout the PSA, sometimes it is too loud and then back to normal. The pronunciation was OK but you used basic grammar. It's good too because everybody should be able to understand a PSA. The length was good. Oh, and if it's a PSA, I think the contact links should include a website address. The conclusion was OK. I don't think I would study martial art after I hear this. Maybe because there wasn't any warning what would happen if I don't study martial art. one really good thing you did is stick to the topic. It was pretty smooth. i couldn't hear many effect. Overall, you did a pretty good job guy. Some suggestions for improvement would be try to make the volume the same and smoother transition. But it was pretty good overall.
Ok, guy I know that our PSA is not smooth because James was set the volume that is his fault ^_^ (no offense James) and their only 2 sound effects.
@Annie: Ok, we will try to improve the details so people will understand ^_^ Kay?
@Roxy: quite the same as Annnie
@Loc: Ok we will try to do the voice look like martial art people or low voice ^_^
@Tina: I don't think that there is too much too much violent in the PSA really there only 9 sound of hitting but thank for your a lot of suggestion ^_^ o_O
@Mickey: for the record, we r talking about learning martial o_O but thank :D
Good advertisement but I need to hear it for 3 times to understand what you guys are talking about. However, I like it because it has good sound effect and it make the advertisement mermory... Also, some of the part were not fluency.
ReplyDeleteI like the advertisement is good but I have to hear your advert 4 times to know what you guys talking about. Anyway, I like your advert because you guys put good sound effect and it make your advert become very special. Your enunciation is good and your grammar...Finally, you guys have a good information and good voice but is not very fluency.
ReplyDeleteGreat job guy, but at beginning your sound must little bit louder. I know what you try to say, you try to say we must learn little bit about martial art. Your PSA very creative, and it true. you guy very focus on topic. You don't have any incorrect grammar. You guy smooth the sound very good. You should improve the sound because sometime it to loud some time it to little. You guy do very great job!
ReplyDeleteit is creative but i dont understand too much what are you talking about but is a good advertisement is have a good sound effect
ReplyDeleteThe first thing I noticed is it has too much violent sounds. This is a PSA (I think), so maybe those sounds are not really suitable. Martial art is not the only way to protect you. The volume was not really good throughout the PSA, sometimes it is too loud and then back to normal. The pronunciation was OK but you used basic grammar. It's good too because everybody should be able to understand a PSA. The length was good. Oh, and if it's a PSA, I think the contact links should include a website address. The conclusion was OK. I don't think I would study martial art after I hear this. Maybe because there wasn't any warning what would happen if I don't study martial art. one really good thing you did is stick to the topic. It was pretty smooth. i couldn't hear many effect. Overall, you did a pretty good job guy. Some suggestions for improvement would be try to make the volume the same and smoother transition. But it was pretty good overall.
ReplyDeleteThe voice is not so clear and the effect is to small, dosen't fit with the voices much and need to improve punctuation
ReplyDeleteSo you guys need to imrove your voice and effect more
ReplyDeleteOk, guy I know that our PSA is not smooth because James was set the volume that is his fault ^_^ (no offense James) and their only 2 sound effects.
ReplyDelete@Annie: Ok, we will try to improve the details so people will understand ^_^ Kay?
@Roxy: quite the same as Annnie
@Loc: Ok we will try to do the voice look like martial art people or low voice ^_^
@Tina: I don't think that there is too much too much violent in the PSA really there only 9 sound of hitting but thank for your a lot of suggestion ^_^ o_O
@Mickey: for the record, we r talking about learning martial o_O but thank :D
THANK EVERY1 ^_^ o_O <>_<>